JoobieDoobieDoo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Redemption]

Judging from your other tracks I've listen to, you enjoy a slow build up, starting very sparse. Which is really cool actually! I guess I feel like there's A LOT of mid to high end stuff going on for the first 2 minutes, and very little low mid to lows. I think even just a nice dark verb would add a lot for me. Just give it a smoother, fuller, and warmer body to every thing. I know Kalimba's can be really harsh and tiny, because they're just small tinny pieces of metal. That with the filtered drums just adds up to me wanting just a little bit of something down there. Maybe those background sustained chords could've filled that in if they were louder or eq'd a lil different, dunno. Still great ideas and work! Just some constructive criticism on what I would've personally done different.

[Waiting]

Cool ideas. I think the second, fuller section sounds great! That ostinato guitar part that plays through out the whole song is maybe a little iffy tuning-wise, but maybe you wanted it that way. I think I would enjoy that first section slightly more if it had a bit more fullness or "juice" to it, like the second section does. Cool stuff though! I like the mixing of genres, keep being you.

Droid responds:

Preciate it! I actually got the guitar from Rob Scallon's latest video lol. He played this arpeggio thing and ended up making a track out of it. Thanks again!

[Just a waltz...]

Those call and answer melodies in octaves are super gorgeous. Nicely written, I dig it. Very melancholy.

[REVENGE]

Pretty cool, you have nice choices in melody, harmony, and chord movement. I think it would sound nice to have those guitar midis panned hard left and right with different settings, or in different octaves. To get that classic double tracked guitar sound. I do really enjoy the cheesy midi vibe though.

Lati responds:

I'm very grateful for your review, really thank you so much! (^o^).
I will work on more music for you and for all! (^-^)

[The Fifth Degree 1.1]

That chromatic bit at around 1:23 is cool.